FIXME
We would need to fill this in from the two whiteboards on Thur 1.
Bad Story Elements
- Unclear motivations
- Unnecessary detail
- Lack of enthusiasm
- No arc
- Lack of faith in audience interest
- Lack of confidence
- Perfect people as protagonists
- Lack of infletion; monotone, no pace.
- Not knowing your audience
- No enunciation
- No tact
- Fiddling, walking around unnec.
- Bad gesturing
- "Suggesture"
- Talking to fast