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FIXME

We would need to fill this in from the two whiteboards on Thur 1.

• Unclear motivations
• Unnecessary detail
• Lack of enthusiasm
• No arc
• Lack of faith in audience interest
• Lack of confidence
• Perfect people as protagonists
  • No way to relate
• Lack of infletion; monotone, no pace.
• Not knowing your audience
• No enunciation
• No tact
• Fiddling, walking around unnec.
• Bad gesturing
• "Suggesture"
• Talking to fast